Final Leads
The the "Who" lead is the most appropriate, even though the "who" in this story is not a famous person. The fact that he was the one who was robbed and beaten with a toilet seat is important.
Who:
A man, 24, was robbed and beaten with a toilet seat in his own apartment complex at 2200 California St. yesterday at 9 a.m., and is now at El Camino Hospital.
Where:
At 2200 California St. a man, 24, was robbed and beaten with a toilet seat yesterday at 9 a.m.
How:
Two men lured a man into his own apartment complex, robbed him, took his keys, beat him with a toilet seat and drove away in his Toyota Corolla, yesterday at 9 a.m.
What:
A toilet seat was used as a weapon to beat a man, 24, when two men robbed him of his cars and keys after luring him into his own apartment complex, yesterday at 9 a.m.

2 Comments:
are you single!!!??????????????
how old are you???????
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